I have eaten
the cookies
that were in
the glass jar.
and which
you were probably
saving
for my school lunches.
forgive me mum
they were delicious
so crumbly
and so chocolatey.
Candice Sue Christina Tonihi Allen Moa
I love your poem because it has detail about what your talking about and how you described the cookies, i showed empathy meaning in your poem i could feel what you were describing and how you felt to.I also liked how you added your full name at the end. p.s You did a great job with this poem and hope you write more.
Hi Candice..
ReplyDeleteI love your poem because it has detail about
what your talking about and how you described the cookies, i showed empathy meaning in your poem i could feel what you were describing and how you felt to.I also liked how you added your full name at the end.
p.s You did a great job with this poem and hope you write more.
Leila